Unlike your friends, I'll be honest with you about your script.
Gab’s feedback was invaluable. She has such a comprehensive and thorough knowledge of narrative and comedic storytelling that, regardless of where your script is in the process, you will gain vital help from her stupid amazing brain.
As a writer, I know the blood, sweat, and furious masturbation that's poured into each script, and my goal is to provide you with notes and coverage that are just as thoughtful. With a BFA in Writing for Film & TV from the University of the Arts, I can help make your script narratively effective, proofed, and polished. My original half-hour comedy pilot, Gab & Kev Make it Weird, won me both the Dr. Frederick P. Cornell Excellence in Writing Award and the President’s Award at the University of the Arts, and made me a finalist in the 2017 Sundance Episodic Storytelling and YouTube New Voices Labs, as well as a semi-finalist in The Second City Sitcom Contest of 2017. Since I gave up Italian when Mandarin Chinese became the #2 international business language, I’m now fluent in narrative structure, so please — if you've got a script on-hand in any stage, EMPLOY YA GIRL to read it and give you coverage that's more educated, constructive, and honest than your “friends."

Email me with the subject line: Script Coverage. All payments can be made via Venmo (@obiwanbottoni) or Paypal.

Original Pilots (half-hour)
- Proofreading
- Notes sent by email

Original Pilots (1 hour)
- Proofreading
- Notes sent by email
Original Pilots (half hour)
- Proofreading
- Notes sent by email
- 30 minute phone call
Spec Scripts (up to 65 pages)
- Proofreading
- Notes sent by email
Original Pilots (up to 65 pages)
- Proofreading
- Notes sent by email
- 30 minute phone call

Pilots/Specs (up to 65 pages)
- Proofreading
- Notes sent by email
- 1 hour meeting or phone call
- Follow-up review
Features (up to 120 pages)
- Proofreading
- Notes sent by email
- 30 minute phone call
Original Pilots/Specs & Web Series (up to 65 pages)
I'll rewrite all your shit.